Here are the corrections I completed within the week. My magazine now is completely finished as I had made the improvements on my front cover, contents page and double page spread. Below are the improvements I've made by following my teacher's feedback.
On my front cover, I had to change a specific font which I mistakenly put which made my whole front cover look not professional. I made the change without adjusting the font size or colour and it all fitted in perfectly. By changing the font, It has now made my whole front cover look more consistent as the theme of the magazine is throughout.
As you can see from below, I had to correct tiny grammer mistakes and I had to make sentences shorter and snappier in my contents page. I followed the feedback that my teachers gave me and decided to change some sentences around. Additionally, I had to change the position of the photo of "Efto" as the top of the head was cut out. I made the change by placing a box on top of her. This solved the problem and it didn't look too cut out. Another target was to fill in the white space from the "EXTRAS!" column, which I completed. I put it another headline which took up the whitespace and this made my contents page not look to dull and empty.
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